Danny is a poor little boy. He has grease marks all over his clothes. He has small pimple like eyes. He walks around with a spanner in his right hand.
Alistair
Danny is a very short, skinny, bony child who looks like he is 7 or 8. He wears grubby clothes and small shoes to protect his tiny feet. His face is loaded with a big broad smile, a normal size nose and little happy eyes. Danny has scruffy blonde hair and pale skin. He has dirty hands that are always there to lend some help to his father.
Lily
Danny is a young boy. He helps his dad fix cars. He's always dirty from the grease marks. He is very short, skinny and bony. You should see his legs; they are like matchsticks.
Charlotte
I loved reading your descriptive writing. I could really make a picture in my mind when I read your descriptions. Keep up the great work!
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Great writing room 5 it is very descriptive keep it up ben.w
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